FCAs Kavon Carroll
February 1, 2012
English 6-4
School Uniforms
1. Supporting details
2. Parallel structure
3. Sophisticated vocabulary
Dear Dr. Richard O’Malley,
“Freedom rings where opinions clash”. (Adlai Stevenson) Kids will start wearing the school uniforms in September. There can be discounts for the school uniforms. People won’t have the rights to have any type clothes to wear for the school year. There uncomfortable, the kids have no freedom, and the school uniforms are bad for different seasons.
The first reason why school uniforms are bad because they are itchy and tight. They come in one size. Heavyset kids would have to expand the shirts, somehow to fit into them. Slim kids will have to wait to grow into shirts. The kids might have to exchange amongst each other, during the school year. What the township will say is they come in different sizes. The township wrong because they don’t make the shirts.
Kids have no freedom. The kids won’t have the freedom to express themselves. If there Muslim, have to wear those robes but they cant because they are breaking their religious rules. Kids won’t express themselves. The township would say the clothes come out different colors. They are wrong on this because it is fun and there is no freedom.
The clothes are not good for different seasons. The uniforms are bad for health. If you have a skirt and its snowing your going to get sick. Long sleeves in the summer, you’ll pass out. The township would say it comes in different varities. They are wrong because they don’t make them.
No one won’t the freedom express their opinions. Three reasons are the unfashionable, no freedom, and bad for different seasons. No one likes them, plus there unfashionable.
Sincerely,
Kavon Carrolls
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